Revised Narrative

To get the basic idea of a person having a vision we could do either of these:
Have the protaganist having a nightmare
Have the protaganist having a day dream
Have the protaganist seeing things that aren't their

We decided to have the protaganist in a day dream and possibly use a medium still frame like in dawn of the dead and napolean dynamite but in ours she would have a loving look rather than a gormless look to signify romance and appeal to a female audience.

Why a vampire and a female would be out in the middle of nowhere at night:
We could either have them camping.
Not have it at night.
Or have it in a more commonly used area for a teenager.
Perhaps theirs other people and it's a party.

We decided to use the camping idea so we could still have it at night and still stick within the conventions of the genre to frighten our audience.

Why the vampire chases the protaganist.
He loves her.
He cannot help it he's a vampire.
He's a rapist or totally evil.

We decided to include the use of love to appeal to a female audience and we decided to show the vampire as a victim to his vampireness as in Twighlight.We decided to go with a young countertypical vampire because it is easier to create.